Friday, November 7, 2008

Doors

Tonight
its the sound
of the

far-off       thudding            h   E    a               Rt
h   E    a               Rt
thudding
      far-off



         whirling f~a~n


      unhindered thoughts
            
f~~~~a~~~~n unhindered         whirling thoughts            
                     drunk moth


                              rough j^^^^ea^^^n__s           
f~~~~a~~n~~~           unclipped  pa  p    e  r  s


       far-off           h   E    a               Rt
                      thudding



ruffling     c
c                 u            a                    n
     u         r        t                i
               t
                a
               i
                n                     dry throat


unclipped  pa  p    e  r  s
                                                whirling




                  tapping

       keyboard

whirling unhindered ruffling
                                thoughts

____sighs____

                thudding   h   E    a    Rt



that make me
Me


and the night
Night

4 comments:

J. said...

mmm. :)

and at the end
that make me
Me

Samar said...

that makes two of us ;)

Arfi said...

this really works in light of the conversation we had.

my only gripe is that curtains ought to be ruffled a bit more symmetrically. :)

Samar said...

All is not lost then; so much for the treachery of the medium, if you know what I mean ;)

Symmetry. I better not start commenting on the need for asymmetry. So, lets blame HTML ;)